Website adjusted

Today I made a few adjustments after receiving feedback from my teacher Sam. See these below.

The first thing I changed was the name on my homepage to Fashion Communication and styling.

Here I changed the intro from my last project. This is now in more detail and extensive. 

First I had ultimate black as name for my image but I've changed this into the title of my project. I did wanted to change the name in the drop down menu on the portfolio but the title was too long so this is still Ultimate black editorial.

 On the frontpage I've added my name and module name.

The intro in my flipbook is also adjusted. Sam gave me an example of how to do it. I used more a branding and marketing strategy, like a sales pitch. But now this introduction is more extensive and what the project is about.

As last I changed the About me page, this is more extensive and in detail.

When everything was adjusted I checked if everything looked good and checked the mobile modus ass well. 

I am really happy I asked for feedback because at first I was happy how everything was looking and didn't know my website needed adjustments. After the feedback I found out that my website needed an update. luckily this has now been corrected and everything is well written and up to date. Also the about me page is much more comprehensive and professional with the help of my teacher. The intros to my projects and those in my project are now much clearer and have a more comprehensive explanation of what my project is all about. Everything is now well presented which made me create a better and clearer website. The feedback has given me a better understanding of how to present and explain projects. This was very educational and I will take this knowledge with me to my progression route.